The last 50 pages were probably the best - or I was just getting excited at finishing the darn thing! Again, overkill on the plot-lines but the near drowning incident was quite exciting:
I force myself to dive down deeper, scrabbling at him, trying to catch hold of anything to drag him to the surface. He's dead weight in my arms and shows no sign of life, and for a moment I just want to give up too - open up my mouth and let the sea flood in and drown my pain... (p.252)
The offer still stands - can someone please read it and tell me what you think?
Miss ^__^
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